Jake’s land of Tomorrow |
Each step a myriad of miles so many strides in all. For just one glance of Cumberland as crystal waters fall.
When day is veiled shall look upon a moon bows rarest glimmer Which forms,reflects an arch of light on still clear waters shimmer.. As morning casts her beauty; alters Fields to many shades. On gentle rolling meadow grass Her purple blue cascades. Hear symphonies that fill the air sweet song of chickadees. Will carry threw the woodland paths to nest in tulip trees.. To glimpse,the blaze of Man o’ war that every colt must follow In Appalachian mountains high to deep secluded hollow. From brow to face those silhouettes each stoop from grinding toil Will reap rewards black glistening jewel holds deep within its soil. In echoed voice of Abraham no thistles here will grow Replaced by blooms of golden rod and trumpet vines on show If time was ours to take my Jake perhaps a moment borrow I’d hold it just to stand with you to see land of tomorrow |
7 responses to “Jake’s land of tomorrow”
picto2010
April 19th, 2012 at 21:27
I don’t know how you do it! Great stuff! 🙂
eliza keating
April 19th, 2012 at 21:33
Thank you so much..I have a dear writer friend Jake who lives in Kentucky so I wrote this piece for him..xx
snydeen
June 25th, 2012 at 17:36
Wow. I really like this!
Carla
July 25th, 2012 at 15:57
Your images are astounding! I adore your poetry!
Damyanti
October 12th, 2012 at 01:58
lovely rhythm and imagery.
freshnewblog
October 29th, 2012 at 02:19
Eliza How are you? You found me on here and then you just kind of disappeared. My son Ezra is in second grade now. He is a good reader. Did I see that you have a poetry contest on here? I love poetry. I have a new website it is freshnewblog.wordpress.com.
Jin Ai
August 1st, 2013 at 16:37
You have an amazing way with words. Beautiful.
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